A Perfectly Messed-up Story

A Perfectly Messed-up Story

Book - 2018
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Little Louie's story keeps getting messed up, and he's not happy about it! What's the point of telling his tale if he can't tell it perfectly? But when he stops and takes a deep breath, he realizes that everything is actually just fine, and his story is a good one-imperfections and all.
Publisher: [Fairfax, Virginia] :, [Library Ideas, LLC],, 2018
Edition: Vox edition.
ISBN: 9781948381475
Branch Call Number: VOX J MCDON P
Additional Contributors: Mayers, Chris


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May 20, 2019

The unexpected can add to your story...sometimes it makes it even better

DBRL_KrisA Dec 19, 2016

From the creator of the Mutts comic strip comes this gentle reminder for us book snobs and neat freaks (and, yeah, kids too) that it's ok if things (including books) get a little messy, and it's alright if things don't go according to plan.

Aug 13, 2015

Read on 2015-Aug-6.

Daniel said he didn't like the messed-up colors used in the pictures of the book. Anyway, it is a funny story.

CRRL_CraigG Jun 25, 2015

Patick McDonnell uses digital skills to combine drawings of Louie and his world with realistic looking smudges and stains. The story turns on Louie's realization that sometimes life is not perfect, giving this book a lovely perspective of accepting yourself and others.

Read more at: http://www.librarypoint.org/perfectly_messed_up_story_mcdonnell

JCLCatherineG Jun 06, 2015

I read this book three times in one night at my kids' request! It's a unique and hysterical picture book for any kid who has ever made a mess.

Jan 13, 2015

Louie is happily skipping along in this story until jelly plops onto the book. Then peanut butter followed by orange juice. Later comes crayon that gets smudged and fingerprints. Louie decides the story is ruined and can't go on until he realizes life is good even with the smudges.

The illustrations are a combinations of pen and ink, crayon, watercolor and messes. It is essentially the same illustration repeated on each page with no variation other than the messes.

On the first two pages I was hoping to like this book. I liked Louie's smile and his happy attitude. But on page four the first mess happens and the story line stops. Louie spends the rest of the book trying to restart his story and complaining about the messes on his pages. There was so much interaction possibility with these messes that could have sustained a story, but the author did not choose this route. I lost interest after page four and was sadly disappointed.

BklynKalliopiM Dec 18, 2014

McDonnell's A Perfectly Messed Up Story fits in with the recent trend of "metafiction" titles. Just as our story gets started, our main character Louie is hit with a splat of grape jelly, followed by a plop of chunky peanut butter. Fearing his story will never get off the ground, Louie feels utterly defeated. Youngsters will love watching Louie rebound from his messed-up story, with plenty of laughs along the way. Great for group read alouds or independent reading.

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Feb 02, 2019

cindylund thinks this title is suitable for 4 years and over


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